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[Unlisted Member 117]

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Edited February 6, 2021 by Unlisted Member

[Summer Darj 292]

I like this one, seems fun to me. Encourages decks that mixes the aforementioned types and can be really potent with lucky excavations, even better if the monsters you run have Quick or on-Summon effects. And being a Trap keeps it fairly slow, IMO.

 

My only issue is the wording. "Immediately after this card resolves" clause is mainly used to perform non-effect actions like a Normal/Synchro/Xyz/Link Summon, so there is no need to use it for the follow-up effect of this card. You should just write it all together with the excavating effect and remove the clause. It may come off as convoluted and less PSCT-friendly, but that's the correct way AFAIK.

[Unlisted Member 117]

9 minutes ago, Darj said:

I like this one, seems fun to me. Encourages decks that mixes the aforementioned types and can be really potent with lucky excavations, even better if the monsters you run have Quick or on-Summon effects. And being a Trap keeps it fairly slow, IMO.

 

My only issue is the wording. "Immediately after this card resolves" clause is mainly used to perform non-effect actions like a Normal/Synchro/Xyz/Link Summon, so there is no need to use it for the follow-up effect of this card. You should just write it all together with the excavating effect and remove the clause. It may come off as convoluted and less PSCT-friendly, but that's the correct way AFAIK.

K I removed that clause... And just replaced it with the word "Also,". After looking at other excavation effects... Though I haven't seen that written after bullet point effects or listings before. Maybe I am missing a good example there.

Edited October 6, 2019 by BGMキャノン

[Summer Darj 292]

Yeah... you may have to type the 2 parts of the text together and leave the bullet list until the end.

[Unlisted Member 117]

13 minutes ago, Darj said:

Yeah... you may have to type the 2 parts of the text together and leave the bullet list until the end.

Yeesh... I wish there was way to make it less of a run-on like how I initially typed it. XD It lost some wording elegance in the aftermath. I am going to look for that example if possible.

EDIT: So I at least found a monster that uses bullet points as a break: Magician's_Souls , but I don't know if that is just because of how OCG can do things (given it hasn't been released in TCG yet). Plus, I don't think that is enough to justify my PSCT ideals here as much as I don't like how the wording looks.

Edited October 6, 2019 by BGMキャノン

[Summer Darj 292]

I would write it like this:

You can only activate 1 "Cattle Stampede" per turn. Excavate the top 5 cards of your Deck, and if you do, Special Summon up to 3 excavated monsters with the following Monster Types (you cannot Special Summon 2 or 3 from the same category), also place the rest on the bottom of the Deck, then, if you Special Summoned 2 or more monsters by this effect, (you can) destroy 1 card your opponent controls.

•  Beast monster
•  Beast-Warrior monster
•  Winged Beast monster