.

[Unlisted Member 117]

.

Edited February 6, 2021 by Unlisted Member

[Summer Darj 292]

Surprised you didn't name the tokens as "Onionion Token" and "Onion Token" :v
I'm confused about the last effect. The way you wrote it, instead of the Tokens being destroyed, they Summon the 2 smaller Tokens instead. But that's, well, unfair, since they are practically indestructible as the destruction substitution effect doesn't have a limit of uses nor anything. I assume the Token is intended to generate the 2 smaller Tokens once it's destroyed, but would like for you to confirm.

[Unlisted Member 117]

1 hour ago, Darj said:

Surprised you didn't name the tokens as "Onionion Token" and "Onion Token" :v
I'm confused about the last effect. The way you wrote it, instead of the Tokens being destroyed, they Summon the 2 smaller Tokens instead. But that's, well, unfair, since they are practically indestructible as the destruction substitution effect doesn't have a limit of uses nor anything. I assume the Token is intended to generate the 2 smaller Tokens once it's destroyed, but would like for you to confirm.

Do you mean the "Each time these Tokens"... part? Perhaps I should have written it as "Each time a 'Thick Layer Token'" to specify which token generates 2 more.

I didn't intend it to loop. The idea is that the smaller Tokens don't generate any more.

Edited October 20, 2019 by BGMキャノン

[Summer Darj 292]

5 hours ago, BGMキャノン said:

Do you mean the "Each time these Tokens"... part? Perhaps I should have written it as "Each time a 'Thick Layer Token'" to specify which token generates 2 more.

I didn't intend it to loop. The idea is that the smaller Tokens don't generate any more.

I mean the "Each time an "Onionion Token" would be destroyed by battle or by card effect..." part, since the "would" implies the Token is not actually destroyed. It's usually accompanied with an "instead" at the end of the effect, but it's missing in this case so it's not clear what the effect is supposed to do. Also, effects granted to Tokens usually don't start a chain and behave more like lingering continuous effects, see Cobra Jar, Horseytail and Wall of Ivy for examples, so the last effect can be rewritten as a cont. effect.

[Unlisted Member 117]

Ohhh Okay got it. Fixed.

Edited October 21, 2019 by BGMキャノン