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Toon Swordmistress

EARTH | Warrior/Toon/Effect | ⭐⭐⭐⭐

1400 ATK | 1400 DEF

Cannot attack the turn it is Summoned. While you control "Toon World" and your opponent controls no Toon monsters, this card can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn: If this card is sent to the GY by the effect of a Toon monster or as Tribute for the Summon of a Toon monster; You can Special Summon this card.

 

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Randomly felt like making a counterpart for Kanan the Swordmistress and also to draw a toon monster for the first time. Normal Kanan looks so sultry I decided to go for a Jessica Rabbit sort of style for her toon version. Didn't have any groundbreaking effect in mind for her, so I went with a simple tribute fodder effect to give a little support to other toons, but I'm open to other ideas for her if anyone wants to take a swing at it.

Edited by Truffle Shuffle

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You could probably stand to add a more powerful effect to her, because Toons are really in a bad position right now. Maybe remove the "Cannot attack the turn it is Summoned" effect – that clause on every card really hurts the deck's viability. Or maybe make it not apply to Special Summons from her own effect, like this:

Cannot attack the turn it is Summoned, except by its own effect. While you control "Toon World" and your opponent controls no Toon monsters, this card can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn: If this card is sent to the GY by the effect of a Toon monster or as Tribute for the Summon of a Toon monster; You can Special Summon this card.

 Or just have it so that her "Can attack directly if Toon World is out" doesn't apply the turn she is summoned, like so:

While you control "Toon World" and your opponent controls no Toon monsters, if this card was not Summoned this turn, it can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn: If this card is sent to the GY by the effect of a Toon monster or as Tribute for the Summon of a Toon monster; You can Special Summon this card.

Anyway, I like what's going on here. Toons need more love.

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Basically it is specialized on being Tribute fodder for Toons. You are on the right track, IMO. Give it a self-Summon from hand condition or effect and it would be much better. Also, the OPT clause in the self-revival effect is pointless because such OPTs are reset when the cards gets on the field again. You have to use a "hard OPT" instead: "You can only use this effect of X once per turn". Actually... if you want to take a more flavorful approach, yoiu got the "float lightly" already covered because the card float into itself, so the "stings sharply" part... you can make it destroy a face-up card on the field when it's Summoned by its own effect, providing Toons some removal power.

I like the drawing, by the way. It has a sexy vibe. Keep it up!

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