Gorz, the Bestower of Darkness

[Sleepy 211]

Gorz, the Bestower of Darkness
DARK Level 7 [Fiend / Effect] 2700/2500
Once per turn: You can target 1 monster in your GY and 1 Token Monster you control; The Token's Level becomes equal to the Level of the target in the GY, and it gains 600 ATK and DEF for each card in your hand.
Once per turn: You can target 1 monster your opponent controls; destroy 1 monster from your hand or field with the same Level, and if you do, change control of the target.
When you take battle damage: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. You must control no cards to activate and to resolve this effect.
If Summoned this way: Special Summon 1 "Bestower of Darkness Token" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/Level 7/ATK ?/DEF ?) for each monster your opponent controls. Their ATK and DEF are each equal to the amount of battle damage you took. 
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Since neither Gorz or Tragoedia seem to make the cut nowadays, I made a card that's Gorz, but Summons many Tokens depending on how much the opponent extends,
and that can otherwise get a Token themed deck revolving around it as it turns any Token into a Tragoedia (this last bit is regardless of how it was Summoned or if the Tokens were even produced by this card itself).

Adjusting to powercreep, but what do you think? Not needed? Over doing it? Not enough? xP

[Summer Darj 292]

It's certainly an improvement. It's missing some flavor by losing Gorz' part that inflicts effect damage back to the opponent, but it doesn't have to have everything. Still, it is held back by requiring no cards in your control and taking battle damage, unlike original Gorz who can Summon itself upon taking effect damage. IMO you have to work on the way it Summons itself, make it more flexible. Even with the potent effects you gave it, if it's cumbersome to Summon, then its impact remains restricted. I'm thinking it can very well get way by summoning itself when taking effect damage as well, which means the tokens would have ATK/DEF equal to that effect damage. That way, it can be live even when going second, if the opponent happens to play a card that inflicts damage to you.

Edited April 24, 2019 by A Crap Guide to CC