Dragonic Knight

[TheLegalNinja 0]

If you control a Dark Dragon-Type monster except “Dragonic Knight”: You can Special Summon this Card. When this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step, You can target 1 Dragon-Type monster in your GY:Return it to the hand and if you do, switch this card to Attack Position and it can attack gain in a row. You can only use the effect of “Dragonic Knight” Once Per Turn. 

Edited March 16, 2019 by TheLegalNinja

[Summer Darj 292]

A card with that name already exists:


Text fix:
If you control a DARK Dragon monster except “[this card's new name]”: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step. During your Battle Phase: You can target 1 Dragon monster in your GY; return it to the hand, and if you do, change this card to Attack Position, and if you do that, this card can make a second attack during this Battle Phase. You can only use this effect of “[this card's new name]” once per turn.

Now, a thing to clarify is the first effect: You wrote it as if it started a chain, by including the (:), but then you wrote "from your hand" in parenthesis, and that's only done in inherent Summons (e.g. Cyber Dragon). So, IDK if you want it to be inherent, or make it start a chain.
Regardless, I suggest a hard OPT on the self-summon effect, otherwise you could create "Samurai - Kizan" scenarios, and those aren't too nice nor fair. The other effect should be fine I guess, if only because it is Battle-Phase reliant and needs a slight GY set-up, although it is still potent for OTKs. 3000 ATK is sure a lot for a monster that can Summon itself in such way. How about at least halve the battle damage from the second attack? Although I would be more comfortable with it if it had 2300~2500 ATK instead.

Edited March 14, 2019 by Darj

[TheLegalNinja 0]

On 3/11/2019 at 8:57 AM, Darj said:

A card with that name already exists:


Text fix:
If you control a DARK Dragon monster except “[this card's new name]”: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step. During your Battle Phase: You can target 1 Dragon monster in your GY: Return it to the hand, and if you do, change this card to Attack Position and if you do that, this card ca make a second attack during this Battle Phase. You can only use this effect of “[this card's new name]” once per turn.

Now, a thing to clarify is the first effect: You wrote it as if it started a chain, by including the (:), but then you wrote "from your hand" in parenthesis, and that's only done in inherent Summons (e.g. Cyber Dragon). So, IDK if you want it to be inherent, or make it start a chain.
Regardless, I suggest a hard OPT on the self-summon effect, otherwise you could create "Samurai - Kizan" scenarios, and those aren't too nice nor fair. The other effect should be fine I guess, if only because it is Battle-Phase reliant and needs a slight GY set-up, although it is still potent for OTKs. 3000 ATK is sure a lot for a monster that can Summon itself in such way. How about at least halve the battle damage from the second attack? Although I would be more comfortable with it if it had 2300~2500 ATK instead.

Originally intended it it to start a chain