Horus the Black Link Dragon

[Sleepy 211]

Horus the Black Link Dragon
FIRE [ Dragon / Link / Effect ] 3000 ATK    LINK - 1
Arrow: Down
1 Level 6 FIRE Dragon that destroyed a monster by battle this turn.
Must be Special Summoned by Link Summon with the above material.
If this card is destroyed by battle or effect: You can Special Summon 1 "Horus the Black Flame Dragon" monster from your hand, Deck or GY, ignoring the Summoning conditions.
Up to once per chain, if a Spell Effect is activated: You can target 1 monster on the field and have the Spell Effect instead become the following; the target's controller gains 1000 LP.

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-It's similar to Horus LV6's evolution pattern but you make it on MP2 instead of EP, from the Extra Deck instead of having to main something you might draw into, and so long as you match the traits (Type, Attribute, Level) you can use whatever as lower form.
-Horus LV8 only negates card activations, this card negates spell effect activations... well not "negate" but replaces the effect for +LP for you. It'll always be able to target itself and this clears the confusion in the wording on bestowed effects where you have to read it from your opponent's perspective and stuff.... Also, you can do heal/burn or raise your opponent's LP for whatever reason.

Edited February 1, 2019 by Sleepy

[Summer Darj 292]

Not sure why it targets a monster and the doesn't do anything with that target.
I like that you explore other conditions for Link Summoning, in this case a monster that destroyed something by battle.
Seems good enough to me. The condition may be too specific, but in exchange you get something close to a Naturia Beast. It should be alright.

[Sleepy 211]

12 hours ago, Darj said:

Not sure why it targets a monster and the doesn't do anything with that target.
I like that you explore other conditions for Link Summoning, in this case a monster that destroyed something by battle.
Seems good enough to me. The condition may be too specific, but in exchange you get something close to a Naturia Beast. It should be alright.

Target without resolution is not the main issue from what we chatted this afternoon so I'll try to tackle this:
You mentioned the Link and Spell doing a weird collective target > resolve interaction. 

Here's a potential change that could fix the issue:

Must be Special Summoned by Link Summon with the above material.
If this card is destroyed by battle or effect: You can Special Summon 1 "Horus the Black Flame Dragon" monster from your hand, Deck or GY, ignoring the Summoning conditions. If a Spell Card/Effect is activated: You can target 1 monster on the field and treat it as targeted by the Spell effect, and have the activated effect become; the target's controller gains 1000 LP.

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Edited February 2, 2019 by Sleepy

[Sleepy 211]

Ooops, sorry, double posted by mistake....

Edited February 2, 2019 by Sleepy

[Summer Darj 292]

Mind the punctuation marks, you latest version is now even more awkward ^^"
You wrote the conversion in the "cost" section, before the ;, when it should be after it as shown in Durendal, Dark Deal, etc.

Must be Special Summoned by Link Summon with the above material.
If this card is destroyed by battle or effect: You can Special Summon 1 "Horus the Black Flame Dragon" monster from your hand, Deck or GY, ignoring its Summoning conditions. If a Spell Card or effect is activated: You can target 1 monster on the field; treat it as if it was targeted by the Spell effect, also the activated effect becomes "The target's controller gains 1000 LP".