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  1. I am who you think I am. Good to see you, Cowcow. I had a feeling I was taking a few too many liberties here. Might scrap the character and start over. Thank you for the feedback! EDIT: Can you give me a little more information on the role the church plays in the city? I know it says that they are more subtle about their magic but does that mean that they have weaker magic? And since the Theos family enters The Dungeon on a fairly regular basis, what would be a reasonable floor for one of the family members to have ventured to? Would they be familiar with the early levels of The Dungeon and the dangers inside?
  2. It's been a bit since I've RP'd on a forum. But the DnD influence on this has me interested. Sergei I took some liberties with this application, so I apologize if I pushed the world-building in a direction that you weren't planning. I am obviously happy to edit and change things that don't quite fit. Let me know how I can improve the character. I'll be keeping up to date on events in the IC as well. EDIT: made some pretty significant tweaks to Sergei's backstory...which is to say that I completely rewrote it! However, I think this version of the character better fits into the world. Also fleshed out the personality a bit. Let me know what else can be done to improve him.
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