LordCowCow

Bit too repetitive, not a fan of the voice either, 4/10

Alexis let out a whistle as she looked around the ship. It was an impressive one that's for sure. Kind of shocking that the lone captain back at the bar managed it without a crew. Though, maybe that's why he agreed to help them if they found it. What was less impressive, in Alexis's eyes, were the people aboard it now. Though she assumed some might find their green getups, all matching, somewhat unnerving. "He ain't got a crew and I don't imagine he'd hire a girl like you to go find his boat. So, why are you trying to stir up trouble here Miss?" The girl smirked and shrugged her shoulders. "You can ask him about why he sent me, I'm sure he'd love to see you face to face. In any case it's as I told your charming man there. Supposed to get a trip outta here and can't really do that when they guy whose supposed to take me doesn't have a ship." "Well, you're outta luck there, lass." The man gruffly replied. "You'd be better off finding another captain than that walking pile of booze and hair. Besides, not my fault he don't got no ship no more." "From what I hear not much time to find somebody willing to help out what with the going ons. But if you're not at fault, who is?" "His. What kind of dumbass loses his own ship?" He waved the girl's concerns off and said, "and for that, well, seems you just weren't born with any luck." "I dunno," Alexis said, tapping her foot against the deck, "pretty lucky of me to find you before you left. Seems you're in a hurry after all." "Aye, we are. Enta's no place to be a pirate right now. Gotta get while the getting's good." He raised an eyebrow to the girl saying, "but, we don't take strays with us. So, whatcha gonna do about it, stray?" "Me? Oh, that's easy. I don't plan on getting off this ship. So you can just go about your business and I'll wait right here until you're done." Alexis said with a smile. The man let out a gruff chuckle and said, "alright." He looked over to one of the other bandits and said, "take her over to the side of the boat and keep a close eye on her." He looked back to Alexis and finished, "I hope you know how to swim stray." "Of course I do. But I don't really feeling like taking a dip today." With that Alexis gave a whistle. And from high in the sky Tana let out a whinny as it flew down, bowling over the bandit that was making his way towards Alexis, and landed next to its rider. "Atta girl." Alexis said and climbed on top of the pegasus. Brandishing her lance she called out. "I'm not about to let a buncha soggy bottom dwellers like you lot tell me what to do. Why don't you just give up before I stick this thing where the sun don't shine? Which, looking at some of your pasty faces, is probably lots of places." "I'm glad that Cormag is able to move freely around here. It's not every town that welcomes him like this. Maybe they'd even sell him some clothes too," Rona gave Leon a brief confused look before looking over at Cormag. Imagining him wearing that orange dress that they had found earlier. A short, rough, laugh escaped her lips. "I wonder if he'd like a new saddle." She said, looking at the battered old one that she had been using until then. She didn't know Cormag's tastes though and she wasn't sure she could convince any shopkeep to let him into their store to try them on. "Well, I'm sure he'll have plenty of time to fly above the sea too. Do you need anything else to pass the time? While we're on the boat, that is. It'll probably be a long time so," Pass the time...The statement brought to mind days in the army. What had soldiers done to pass the time then? There was a lot of gambling. Fighting. A dangerous game involving a poisonous snake and a knife. Telling stories, exploits in both battle and bed, and...pillaging. Often other soldiers, especially those of lower ranking, would end up in small towns along the way and occasionally they'd end up breaking things, attacking villagers, and worse. Somehow Rona didn't think these were the types of things Leon meant. So she just gave a shrug. "I'm sure I'll find something. Er, unless you had a suggestion for something we could do, Commander." Leon put a hand to his chin saying, "no, not really. I think some people play card games to spend the time, but outside of paper work and training I haven't really ever done much with my free time." Rona stared at Leon for a moment. Really? He wasn't part of the army, here, right? It was a surprise to find out that the man had about as much experience with free time as her. "Yet, Alexis...ah, nevermind. In that case I suppose we shall just have to find a way to entertain ourselves while we're out there, right?" "I suppose so. Maybe I'll finally learn how to play an instrument," Leon joked. An instrument. Like the pegasus knight. She had to wonder if perhaps the Commander looked up to that girl. "Do you...ah, no, I shouldn't ask." Rona said, feeling suddenly awkward. Leon looked curiously at the girl. "Hm? It's no trouble." "Do you...wish you were more like...Alexis?" Leon stopped in his tracks for a moment, seeming to take in the question. After a brief pause he said, "perhaps. I don't know for certain, but I suppose I admire a few of the things that she has that I don't." "I don't think so!" Rona said, voice trailing off as she realized that she was disagreeing with her Commander. "Sorry, I shouldn't have raised my voice. A-anyway, you have plenty of things she doesn't, ahem...wonder where everyone went off to." She noted, changing the subject suddenly.

6.5/10

While most of them agreed to go with Melissa to her dorm it seemed that the girl with the bat, she never did get her name, was too impatient. Telling the others she wanted to make sure to get her disk, and something about her room being in the other direction, the girl ran off without a second thought. Smacking her bat across a strange, small, satellite monster on the way. Gabby considered sending a Skull Servant with her but then realized she had no idea how they'd act without her around. Heck she still wasn't sure they weren't about to eat her at any moment. Gulping at the thought and swallowing her fear for the moment she responded to Melissa. "Very well, lead the way, we shall gather our resources with haste!" Once there Melissa showed them a text to send to whoever they knew. Which, given that Jun was the vice-captain of the team, included all of one person. Her roommate. Who, Gabby wouldn't be surprised, was likely having the time of her life right about now. She wondered how many pictures the girl had already taken. Either way, better safe than sorry, so she made sure to send off the text as Melissa went into her room. "Ah, be careful." Gabby said before the girl vanished from sight. Then it was just her. And Jun. And the skeletons. "So um...ahem..." She found herself unsure what to say to the girl who looked entirely at ease. It looked as though she didn't really need to say anything, though, as a boy came up to talk to her, or rather them, soon after. She thought she recognized him. That one guy who she had thought was rather mean. He seemed, much like Jun, entirely relaxed in this situation. How many crazy people did this school have anyway? Though she was one to talk, she realized, as she glanced at the Skull Servants. Who...were moving. Towards Souji. With their arms outstretched. "Ah! Wait!" She called out. Then clearing her throat she swept her arms apart. "This one is also one of my flock! He is not to be harmed, but protected, thus I command you forces of darkness!" Her words seemed to work as the skeletons stopped advancing towards him and she let out a small sigh. There was a flapping sound and she looked up to realize that a bunch of bat-like creatures were flying above them. The way they moved Gabby was certain that they, like the Skull Servants, were listening to what she had said. She hadn't even noticed them arrive but it seemed that her "army of darkness" had gained another few members. She could only hope she wasn't getting in too deep. "We are preparing for a grand battle. It is my hope that you are ready for this, young knight of...this land."

The rest of their trip was rather smooth and without much trouble. It seemed that not many trainers had managed to get past Dinah and the majority had stayed on the other side of the route or had gone into the desert. Some of the trainers they did see on the way to the next town looked somewhat nervous and shaken up for some reason. Though they didn't seem to want to talk to anyone as they hurried along down the route towards the earlier city. Once they got close to the city they found out what had caused people to go the other way down the route. Off in the distance they could see the edge of the next town but before that were several people. Behind them was a makeshift blockade made of crates. There were three figures standing there. In the back were a male and female that looked to be dressed similarly to the thug they had met earlier. And in front of those two with his arms crossed over his chest was an adult man with dark red hair and a trimmed beard. Wearing a coat despite the heat. Floating just behind him was a large Glalie which didn't seem too interested in the group as they approached. The man, however, held up one of his hands and stepped forward. "Now hold on there kiddies. Sorry to say you're going to have to turn back. My Team Phoenix is busy taking care of some important business in the town. Can't have a bunch of brats running about and causing issues. So why don't you go about your business elsewhere until we're all done. Maybe do one of those....gym challenges the kids these days are so obsessed with." He then gave a cold smile. "Unless you don't mind getting hurt." Naomi hadn't really paid much attention to the battle the other two were in. She was having enough trouble stopping Knight from diving in front of Princess and trying to take a knock out before the Rhyhorn did. "No, bad, go over that way. Gonna get hurt like that." She said as the Hoppip almost was hit with Princess's Horn Attack. Eventually she managed to get them to separate and noticed that Knight, despite having Synthesis, was being worn down by the multitude of Bugs. A pair of Dwebble in particular caused him a lot of trouble. While watching Knight she hadn't entirely focused on Princess, the Rhyhorn able to fend for herself for the most part, but she did hear the snort as Nathan had caught the Onix. Naomi looked over to see her Rhyhorn watching the boy with narrowed eyes and wondered if perhaps she was annoyed that the Onix was part of the group now. While watching she didn't notice as a wandering Yamask had attacked her. "Ah...Princess, that's nuff." Naomi said and returned the Pokemon. She glanced down at Bug. She had a foot on top of the Trapinch's head to keep it from biting at her ankle but when she returned Princess it slipped out and jumped into her lap. From there it tried to bite onto her shirt and tug at it but Naomi pushed him away. "Nooo...go, fight, train!" She said, gesturing lazily at the area around them. Bug looked over at Knight, Tackling a Sentret, and then back at Naomi, before trying once again to bite her shirt. An idea came to her mind and, reluctantly, Naomi got to her feet as Bug tumbled to the side and went right for her other shoe. She pulled out the last of her first bag of marshmallows and held it above the Trapinch. "I'll give you these if you go train." She said. The Trapinch's eyes flashed as he saw the bag and then immediately turned 180 and went after the Yamask that Princess had got hit by, clamping its jaws around the Ghost type and shaking it around rapidly. "Training's lotta work." Naomi muttered. ----- After much hassle and tribulation the group managed to train their Pokemon a few levels in the ruins. They noticed it was getting darker which caused them to realize that, while they were underground, there must have been some places that was getting light from the sun up above. They decided to head back to the city. Naomi, her usual ride tired from the battling, had to shuffle her way back on her own. By the time they got to the city she was slumped almost entirely over and, in fact, the moment they entered the city's outskirts she collapsed onto a nearby bench and declared. "This'll work for sleep, right?"

Started pretty good but sorta fell off 7/10 Too many high notes for me 6.5/10

7.5/10, too much high pitch

8.5/10, unusual one

7/10 It's good but also not something I'd want to listen to directly much, 6/10

My favorite aspect are the characters and the sprite art/animation. My least favorite aspect is how easy the game is. 51

The character or movie? Well, either way, fine. Not particularly strong feelings. I do like the songs though. 50

That'd be Rapunzel for sure 49

There's no way to not give this a 10/10, it's such lyrical genius

Where's the bell? WHERE'S THE BELL? But yeah anyway, that was quite fun. That moment with the box bridge was incredible. I like how you decided to do this. Was wondering how a text LP of a platformer would work.